LoftyDaDan

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About LoftyDaDan

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  1. I've written a poem...

    ^Thank you, I did not see that. And thanks for the feedback as well!
  2. I've written a poem...

    Strings of lacked rapture bleed through each other Creating a gossamer curtain of breathless longing It lies still as an untouched pool of water The film of silence is stroked, just stroked, and Water ripples; crinkled paper spreading Bounding across fields of azure glass Disturbing all and making things unsure From every experience, nothing configured Feedback would please me. Good or bad, but don't be too harsh. Thanks.
  3. I've written a poem...

    Strings of lacked rapture bleed through each other Creating a gossamer curtain of breathless longing It lies still as an untouched pool of water The film of silence is stroked, just stroked, and Water ripples; crinkled paper spreading Bounding across fields of azure glass Disturbing all and making things unsure From every experience, nothing configured Feedback would please me. Good or bad, but don't be too harsh. Thanks.
  4. Tumblr Anyone?

    Hello, this is my first post to this forum. Not that you need to know that, lol. http://fryingpansareprettygreat.tumblr.com/ I'm kind of an artist.